Sunday, April 10, 2005

why do u care how i looked

why do you care about how i looked?
why do you care to whom i talked to?

why do you bother to care for me?
why do you bother to know who had a crush on me?
why bothered to know?

if you want to be more than friend,
why don't you just tell me?
why don't you just tell me that you love me?

why don't you be a bit braver?
just tell me the 3 words

i will follow you

why we dare not face it?
why you dare not confess?

if being friend is better than love
i'll let it be

but i don't believe
that friendship is greater than love

and you have chosen friendship
why?

so lets just be friend
OK
just tell me what you want
i'll let it be


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it's not that i don't care

it's not that i don't bother

i wanted it to be more than friend

but i don't know how would you accept me

you're just too good for me

it's not that i'm not brave enough

it's because i think that i don't deserve you

i believe love is greater than friendship
but what if you reject me???/

it's not that i don't want to tell you

'i love u'

it's because i'm afraid
that you're not available

i would like to choose love if i can
but
have you ever give me a chance
to say

'i love u'

if i say the 3 words
would you accept me??

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

Eh you got some really nice poem. Can to relate to it a lot, especially the bottom version. :P

Anonymous said...

funny thing! People desire for love! the poem quote: "I believe love is greater than frienship"... unfortunately a lot of us are not expecting what we desire and expecting what we do not desire... for example: but i don't know how would you accept me"... "but what if you reject me"? "I'm afraid that you're not avaiblable"! "have you ever give me a chance to say" I love you"... The poem is nice to express one feelings... but it show very little confidence about oneself and is not expecting the good that one desire, rather expecting the for worse. Well! to cut it short we "fear" of losing something we like" Actually we are living in ABUNDANCE!


Skyback

froginkl said...

skyback..
i truely agreed with wat u commented...but...human being are funny creature....heheh..that's the d matter of the brain and heart...lol

May said...

hmm... I like this one.. ;P